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I used to watch them sway in
the dark like flags.
thighs wrapped around the edges of
light, abyss I couldn't comprehend.
I smoked my first cigarette with
a kind of restlessness.
I gave it everything, then, thin hands,
muffled crying, waking up each
morning with terror on my arms.
Newports, seven bucks a pack,
starfish limbs and blue soliloquy.
I won't grow back.
nettled silver. the unshakable day.
I would like to watch you laughing.
I would like to watch you holding
stacks of books in the rain.
and I want to call you crying
at four in the morning.
and I want to call you holding books
in the rain at four in the morning.
and have you come meet me.
and have it be gold. and have
the park not be so big.
and have a cheap motel and a
drink without consequences.
and I don't want to remember
your name but I don't want it to
matter, either. and I don't want
what we did in the snow in the park
at night to make me a slut.
I was so damn young.
wasn't this what I always
wanted? lipstick stains and roach
clips? sneaking out to meet paper boys?
I would try to love them. would hold
them like thick fog.
would let them be mistakes staining
my fingers and my arms. would let them
be mistakes so I wouldn't have to feel the
impact of regret. each star each boy
would hold their own and I would not burn
in the hearth of silver rain.
the dark like flags.
thighs wrapped around the edges of
light, abyss I couldn't comprehend.
I smoked my first cigarette with
a kind of restlessness.
I gave it everything, then, thin hands,
muffled crying, waking up each
morning with terror on my arms.
Newports, seven bucks a pack,
starfish limbs and blue soliloquy.
I won't grow back.
nettled silver. the unshakable day.
I would like to watch you laughing.
I would like to watch you holding
stacks of books in the rain.
and I want to call you crying
at four in the morning.
and I want to call you holding books
in the rain at four in the morning.
and have you come meet me.
and have it be gold. and have
the park not be so big.
and have a cheap motel and a
drink without consequences.
and I don't want to remember
your name but I don't want it to
matter, either. and I don't want
what we did in the snow in the park
at night to make me a slut.
I was so damn young.
wasn't this what I always
wanted? lipstick stains and roach
clips? sneaking out to meet paper boys?
I would try to love them. would hold
them like thick fog.
would let them be mistakes staining
my fingers and my arms. would let them
be mistakes so I wouldn't have to feel the
impact of regret. each star each boy
would hold their own and I would not burn
in the hearth of silver rain.
Literature
on the cusp
it is just that when i let go of you
when i let go
it's hard to remain that perfect without you.
--
the in-between of love, buds- so full of potential
our love is written in whispers on the pages
of a book which has not yet been opened.
--
that day, the sun had erased the last lines
of an unforgiving winter from my skin, i was renewed
olive skinned and feeling as if i had just fled the eternal
garden naked as i came- free, fallen.
--
the sky was dark;
nothing but the blood red smile of the moon
cut through the transient darkness of the night.
Literature
Write-a-Novel Exercise 1.2
Disclaimer
The following is a typed out version of chapter 1 “Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone” by J.K. Rowling. This is not an original piece of work but a one-page excerpt typed out, by hand, for the purpose of commentary and education. I am not trying to “improve” the original text, only learn about writing by altering it for different effects and to learn the techniques that Rowling masters so well.
Chapter one - Original version
Nothing like this man had ever been seen on Privet Drive. He was tall, thin, and very old, judging by the silver of his hair and beard, which were both long enough to tuck into
Literature
chill 2.0
friday night vibes are
a dialogue
between streetlamp
and sidewalk.
i am the strobe and
i spin again,
bullet-mouthed,
and so you tell me
to bite down.
you,
you reason,
are a good enough explanation,
expectations entrenched
insinuations undressed
on earth that feels too much like paper.
you,
you reason,
are good enough for a lulling conversation,
consolations congregating
up there for your consideration
up there with your condescension
condescension, condescension—
this is your slipping confession?
no.
this is the slip into heavy summer
when bitter winds still bite you
softer than i ever could.
this is the saturdays and sundays
eating i
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This really shook me...I could practically feel the emotion radiating from the words as I read...superb.